I wrote this a couple minutes ago because I needed to express some feelings about my weekend, and that's what poetry is for, right?
Dedicated to James
For #theWrittenRevolution: [link]
I tried this piece with the long lines (as they are now), as well as splitting the longer ones in half for aesthetic. Do you think it would be more effective to make the lines shorter, or keep them long?
I didn't want to make things overstated, so the imagination can fill in the blanks, but is the imagery too vague?
I tried to use minimalistic punctuation. Is it good, or does it detract?